American Icons- Reflection

I discovered that I, when given information on how good writing is supposed to be, can show excellence through my writing and be great at it. One writing tip that I had used while working on my project was that I had went back into my writing and looked at all the words and found the ones that had -ings and went back and changed them to make them sound proper. Another one that I had used was punctuate with power and purpose, I had used that one to make sure that I did not overuse periods and to make sure that if i used certain punctuations that I use them in the correct way. They had effected my writing greatly because you could actually understand it and it wasn't confusing. If I had one more draft I would probably have more people peer edit it so that it could be even more great than it was. When I first walked out into that flight deck I was amazed at what I saw, it was an F/A-18 Hornet about to take off and I wanted to be in one of them flying from place to place. The reason why this sentence stood out to me was because I not only am I giving a past experience you can actually imagine that you are there and looking out on the flight deck.